Used the writing prompt 'A pulse of unfinished business...' from Just Write. They stipulate that you shouldn't edit, so I've only corrected typos. Without meaning to I deviated wildly from the prompt.
“How is
this place any different from a prison?” Crispin had been asking variations of
this question for days. He’d got it into his head sometime around Friday night.
That was when his first “interrogation on the theme of ‘entrapment’” (that’s slightly
paraphrased) got “micro-blogged for the world” (that’s a direct quotation).
He wasn’t
being listened to. In fact he was being actively ignored. It’s quite a thing to
be actively ignored by four different people, all of whom you know. The
confinement of the office where he was being ignored made it all the more
palpable. Most people would notice the shift in atmosphere, the sense of mute
responses and silent tension. Crispin was special in this respect. He carried
on regardless, tossing an apple back and forth.
The other
four people in the office had names which were more common than ‘Crispin’. They
also had less extraordinary personalities and are perhaps none of them as
suited to playing the role of protagonist as Crispin. He had, after all, hours
of practice under his belt. Unlike them, he was used to being the centre of
attention, his own if no one else’s, when running, or singing, or conversing
loudly.
The prison-like
place was his hometown, which is in the south of the country, where the weather
is dry and the days are short. Some prisons, one must admit, do exist in these
weather conditions. His reason for
comparing his hometown to a prison was this: Anders Breivik’s prison had been
described as consisting of “three sections, one to sleep, one to study and one
to exercise.”
He was now
still going on about it. “I sleep in my room, obviously, then I get up and go
to the library, where I study for a few hours and then, when I feel
particularly bored, I go for a run at the track, which is halfway between my
flat and the library anyway. I mean, if one didn’t maintain a healthy attitude,
you could see life as essentially one long waste of breath. You may as well be
in prison.” He tossed the apple up quite high and just about caught it.
One of
those in the office who were working, the one, in fact, with the most common
name of all chose this moment to pipe up, “Didn’t he complain about his cell
being badly decorated as well? You could spruce the place up a bit, couldn’t
you? That’s one freedom you’ve got. You should get started outside.”
A commonly
named girl, roused by this breaking of the silence spoke up, too, “Thing is
Crispin, Anders However-you-pronounce-his-name doesn’t get to work, but some of
us have to. We’re the lucky ones, I suppose. You’re free though. You should go
out and enjoy the world.”
The four of
them, with their normal names, usually so kind to Crispin, all joined in “Go Crispin,
you’re free, you’re free.”
Once I had gotten over the name of the protagonist (ugh...) it actually got quite interesting. especially once we reached the office.
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