magic 9: 2nd attempt

I've been reading about the poetic form 'magic 9', which uses an abacadaba rhyme scheme. Here's my first attempt at writing a magic 9 poem. Different parameters this time -  7 syllables per line, as opposed to alternating between 5- and 7-syllable lines.

Here's my second attempt:

in winter: darkness's height
we get a family feast
and since we know it ain't right
when all is meant to be fine
just to scream and fuss and fight
'stead let's make a cosy scene
where the fire's glowing bright
we are together at least
with games: what a lovely night